Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Inferno! by Scott R. Rigby


Inferno is about a 15-year-old boy named Caleb who finds out that he is a Dream Charmer – somebody with the ability to use their dreams to change the future.  As the most powerful Dream Charmer in a thousand years, it is up to Caleb, with a little help from his dead twin brother Tom, to stop an evil villain named Darius from destroying the gateway between the world of the living and the world of the dead.

While the plot and storyline of this self-published book was fantastic, the author seems to be ignorant of many basic language rules.  The poor structure, misuse of punctuation, and incorrect use of contractions detracted from what potentially could have been a bestseller.  

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